The setting is very compelling and the characters I met were charming, each in their own way, and I was motivated to solve the case. Unfortunately, after searching the crime scene, when I tried to go find Mary to interrogate her, I was sent to an "Oops, you have reached an end, but not the end" page, with no other option than to restart from the beginning.
I'll probably try again later, but for now I want to test a few other entries before the voting deadline.
Nice twist, had me going there. Not sure if it's fixable or a twine thing, but the retrace your steps option seems to stop working after the first time you use it.
The story makes up for the simple but good-looking design. At first I thought: „Ah, yeah: Text and two choices, gotcha” but then I got to the part I was hoping for and without leaving any spoilers I will just say:
I came with high expectations, and you did not disappoint Hope to see more from you soon! No pressure. ᴇɴ(っ◔◡◔)っᴰᴱ
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The setting is very compelling and the characters I met were charming, each in their own way, and I was motivated to solve the case. Unfortunately, after searching the crime scene, when I tried to go find Mary to interrogate her, I was sent to an "Oops, you have reached an end, but not the end" page, with no other option than to restart from the beginning.
I'll probably try again later, but for now I want to test a few other entries before the voting deadline.
That's normal :P
That's part of Act2. I should have phrased the Ooops as a To Be continued ....
Oh! I failed to notice the [Act 1] in the title before, my bad.
no worries :P
It will disappear soon enough.... (when I find the time to update)
Nice twist, had me going there. Not sure if it's fixable or a twine thing, but the retrace your steps option seems to stop working after the first time you use it.
Thanks :)
Probably more of a I made a coding error than a twine thing :P
I'll look into it :)
I definitely laughed. Absolute BEAUTY. reminds me of a faux forensic case i had to do once. well done!
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it :P
The story makes up for the simple but good-looking design.
At first I thought: „Ah, yeah: Text and two choices, gotcha”
but then I got to the part I was hoping for and
without leaving any spoilers I will just say:
I came with high expectations, and you did not disappoint
Hope to see more from you soon! No pressure.
ᴇɴ(っ◔◡◔)っᴰᴱ
Thank you!
Damn you for making me think I was investigating a murder 😡 😡😭😭
❤️❤️❤️❤️Loved it❤️❤️❤️❤️
Some bugs I found:
hehehehe :P
Thanks for the head's up. It is fixed on my end. Should be online this week :)