Entry to the SeedComp!

Play Detective Rye, a down-on-the-luck detective about to delve into a strange case...

Based on the names, locations, or plot points from following seeds:

CW: mention of murder, blood, violence...

Game is keybinded (open in a new page on Opera tho):

1-0 for links
arrows left/right to undo/re-do action

Status	On hold
Platforms	HTML5
Rating	Rated 3.6 out of 5 stars (5 total ratings)
Author	manonamora
Genre	Interactive Fiction
Tags	Detective, humour, Mystery, Noir

Comments

filiaa1 year ago(+1)

The setting is very compelling and the characters I met were charming, each in their own way, and I was motivated to solve the case. Unfortunately, after searching the crime scene, when I tried to go find Mary to interrogate her, I was sent to an "Oops, you have reached an end, but not the end" page, with no other option than to restart from the beginning.

I'll probably try again later, but for now I want to test a few other entries before the voting deadline.

manonamora1 year ago

That's normal :P
That's part of Act2. I should have phrased the Ooops as a To Be continued ....

filiaa1 year ago(+1)

Oh! I failed to notice the [Act 1] in the title before, my bad.

manonamora1 year ago

no worries :P
It will disappear soon enough.... (when I find the time to update)

Jacic1 year ago(+1)

Nice twist, had me going there. Not sure if it's fixable or a twine thing, but the retrace your steps option seems to stop working after the first time you use it.

manonamora1 year ago(+1)

Thanks :)
Probably more of a I made a coding error than a twine thing :P
I'll look into it :)

Cygnus1 year ago(+1)

I definitely laughed. Absolute BEAUTY. reminds me of a faux forensic case i had to do once. well done!

manonamora1 year ago

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it :P

ᴇɴ ⇆ ᴰᴱ Jen̄1 year ago(+1)

The story makes up for the simple but good-looking design.
At first I thought: „Ah, yeah: Text and two choices, gotcha”
but then I got to the part I was hoping for and
without leaving any spoilers I will just say:

I came with high expectations, and you did not disappoint
Hope to see more from you soon! No pressure.
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