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This was very realistically written! Kelsie isn't my type of partner though, I feel her expectations were set too high :| Nice game!

Hahah thanks!
Kelsie def knows what she wants, indeed.

I saw you mentioned a coding error somewhere in your rating, where would it be?

When I chose to go to the flower shop!

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ah darn it. :/
I will hunt this one down! Thank you for the report!

EDIT: oh yeah, I see where it went wrong... Will have it up when I have access to the files later this week. Thanks again!

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no worries! thank you for creating this lovely game <3

Thanks for playing it!

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god.. my face hurts from smiling sm, kels is so cute i love this game sm, i got the fairytale ending and im gonna continue ncowncd i love this gameee

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Aaaaw Thank you <3

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just finished it and (spoiled kinda) got the ending faded away and it’s kinda sad

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Don't worry, there are 9 other endings to find ;)
Some are a bit more funny, some are a bit more sad, some are nice.

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one of the phone things (right before you get to choose if you want to leave her on read or text back with the same excitement) isn’t working so i don’t actually know what she said it just says error and there’s no phone other than that so far i love the game

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Thanks for letting me know!
There was a typo in my code, hence the error. This has been fixed on my end, and will be uploaded sometime today.

Glad you've been enjoying the game so far!

That's fixed!

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The humour is very vibrant and the first two endings are truly something. Did notice “he brought me flowers. I had mentioned to him...” & wasn’t sure if the “he” instead of “they” was a minor slip.

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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the game so far!

Yup def a slip up. Will be corrected soon. Thanks for pointing it out!

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sorry for the delay, it's been corrected :)

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oh my god the part where (SPOILER) i literally crushed the dad's hand. it was too funny i cried.

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😂 I am glad you enjoyed the game! I had quite a lot of fun writing this part as well.

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please give me the chance to tell the girlfriend to fuck off, that's the ending I'd like to have, thank you.

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Hi! Thanks for playing the game!

There is kinda already one option where you can do so. Though it is not explicitly a F-Off. 
Where in the story made you want to tell off the girlfriend?

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sorry for the late reply. it was when I was late and she acted as if it was the end of the f world, closed the door on me and mc couldn't even say anything, I WISH I could just tell her off right there. I was so angry lol

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I understand where you are coming from.

However, I wanted to write some endings where the MC has less agency with how it ends, due to the choices they have made beforehand. I mean, this one is kind of a "bad ending". Not every ending has to be satisfying.

I am currently working on an update which will add 2 more endings. It should be out by the end of the month.

Thank you again for playing!